Dear Mr. and Mrs. Simon,
This is Shyam and with reference to the advertisement made in the local edition of the newspaper "The Daily Express" dated 28th December 2020, I am writing this letter to express my interest in taking up the role as a tutor to your children.
As I have prior experience in teaching German language to students, particularly young children, I am confident that I will be fit for this role. Also, I am a native speaker of German language, so it would be an added advantage to the learners to enhance their language skills in a short time.
Additionally, I hold a diploma certificate on Financial Planning from Stanford University that helped me become a certified financial consultant. Although financial planning might sound complicated to many, I am sure that I could help your family understand how easier it is if you know the right methodologies. Therefore, I can also be of help to your family in understanding the personal finance techniques, planning the budget to include a diversified portfolio.
I am currently pursuing my MBA from University of Melbourne for which I have taken an education loan. In order to manage other expenses such as rent, food and so on, I am looking for part-time job opportunities. Moreover, I have plans to take an advanced German language certification for which I would need to revise fundamentals of the language. So, I think this job could be a win-win to you as well as me.
Please feel free to revert back should you have any questions. Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Shyam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think, such as, you know, as well as, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90334572491 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02894828533 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3833280878 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288346832488 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914520128291 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467105110082 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118729838054 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733921873334 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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