People often say that the younger generation do not have as many responsibilities as the old era. While many people think it could be a beneficial tendency, I believed that the disadvantage of this circumstance should be awareness.
Only children in a small family become a common phenomenon in modern society. Many parents tend to spoil their child as much as they can in order to fulfill their defect from the memory of childhood. They believe that the young generation desire to have a better living condition without pressures.
It is beneficial to mental health if children do not need to take on many responsibilities. Many people have suffered from mental issues which have been caused from their childhood, such as taking care of whole families members or financial duties. Therefore, many modern families do not want their children to have the same experience as them before. It also found that children are presented with more positive thinking than others. They are alway free to do anything with fewer houseworks and they get what they want from the parent, so there is no much negative impact to interrupt their lives.
The negative impact of fewer responsibility for children can be considered in terms of two key points, which are irresponsibility of personality and self dependence. As they do not need to take care of financial duty or household work. The younger generation tends to stay home and do not look for work because they can alway get the support from their parents. In addition to the workplace that the younger generation normally lacked motivation and self excuse, because they do not understand the value of responsibility. It is clear to blame that modern parents have spoiled their children too much and I believe that children should learn to deal with problems from their own experiences and take the responsibilities to deal with it.
In conclusion, while duty free of children during their childhood seems beneficial to their mental health and positive thinking, I believe that the negative implication could lead to irresponsibility and social difficulty in the society.
- Museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- These days Internet based courses have become a popular alternative to university based courses Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures Others argue that it is important to study at university Discuss both th 87
- Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment poverty and animal welfare than previous generations What is your opinion 56
- The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages. 78
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... they want from the parent, so there is no much negative impact to interrupt their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09770114943 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93270743331 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485632183908 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2729772174 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170727177234 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658438145166 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597468986941 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109498229627 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597780692401 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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