- For many years all the stores in our chain have stocked a wide variety of both domestic and imported cheeses Last year however all of the five best selling cheeses at our newest store were domestic cheddar cheeses from Wisconsin Furthermore a recent surve 73
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threaten the integrity of the arts 58
- Understanding the past is of little use to those in current positions of leadership 66
- In any field of endeavor it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field 83
- The following is an excerpt from a speech given to the School Board about a change to the curriculum Because the future will be dominated by technology we must make four years of computer programming mandatory for all high school students If our students 68
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 547 350
No. of Characters: 2681 1500
No. of Different Words: 266 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.836 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.901 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.646 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 213 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 158 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 96 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.35 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.47 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.339 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.53 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.113 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this mindset' or 'These mindsets'?
Suggestion: This mindset; These mindsets
...nthusiasm, and passion for innovations. These mindset may make them not receptive to tourists...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'amenity'?
Suggestion: amenity
...unds would go back to providing a basic amenities for the teeming populace. This is a cas...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 638, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: No
...e with Dubai on Tourism - This is a no! no!, and would hamper any growth in econom...
^^
Line 7, column 462, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
..., thieves, and assassins may come along also. This mixed multitudes may affect the b...
^^^^
Line 7, column 656, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the economy. There is a proper need for further discourse on the state of the Ho...
^^
Line 9, column 452, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d proofs that makes his argument valid. As of this writing the authors statement i...
^^
Line 9, column 475, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... argument valid. As of this writing the authors statement is detrimental to the surviva...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, so, still, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.9520958084 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 55.5748502994 128% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2773.0 2260.96107784 123% => OK
No of words: 547.0 441.139720559 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06946983547 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78380068961 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 204.123752495 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497257769653 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 890.1 705.55239521 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 14.0 1.67365269461 836% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.4533038961 57.8364921388 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.65 119.503703932 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.35 23.324526521 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.70786347227 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128343580522 0.218282227539 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432022553153 0.0743258471296 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614295445117 0.0701772020484 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882327706174 0.128457276422 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398281284382 0.0628817314937 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.3799401198 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32208582834 110% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 98.500998004 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 12.3882235529 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.