There is a debate whether country should spend money for building new rapid train railway lines or bettering current public transportation. I completely agree with the latter view and will explain the reasons.
On the one hand, rapid train is advantageous in reducing traffic congestion. This is because, rapid train can operate swiftly and has special railway lines. Thus, using money to construct more rapid railway lines will support more rapid trains to operate. The more rapid trains that operate, the less traffic jam will occur. However, because rapid train has expensive fare, the possibility for people to be willing to switch from their personal transportation to rapid train will be low. Finally, traffic congestion can not be overcome by the existence of rapid trains.
On the other hand, public transportation also has possibility in overcoming traffic congestion. By bettering public transportation, people will feel more comfortable and safe when riding them. Thus, they will likely to be willing to switch from their personal vehicles to public transportation. Moreover, public transportation such as Bus or MRT usually have affordable prices, which make the possibility for people to switch from their private vehicles will be big, and traffic congestion can be overcome.
In conclusion, using money for constructing more rapid train railways is beneficial because it can help reducing traffic congestion. However, because it has more expensive fare compared to public transportation, I completely agree that the money should be spent in upgrading existing public transportation which has bigger possibility in reducing traffic congestion.
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 36
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing railway lines for very fast trains between cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport Discuss both these vi 67
- In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing railway lines for very fast trains between cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport Discuss both these vi 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
...lways is beneficial because it can help reducing traffic congestion. However, because it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58498023715 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99465484338 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482213438735 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4930789357 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.928571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236095170252 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981665531937 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752067851878 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17634763885 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470646753211 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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