Technical advancements plays an important role in all fields of life. Some people think that electronic means of reading are likely to take place of papers and magazines. According to my opinion both the e- books and newspapers has their own significance in the lives of people.
On the one hand, I believe that people prefer to read stuff online in these days instead of buying books from shops. Firstly, reading books or magazines electronically is cheaper than buying as at present internet could be accessed by everyone easily and people are able to download or read a lot of material on internet sources. Most importantly, if people read newspapers or magazines online then they do not only save money but also their precious time as there is no need to go anywhere to find any particular book or magazine. For example, Wikipedia and encyclopedia provides wide range of data as anyone could search any topic or information on Wikipedia which leads to convenience for people. Secondly, sometimes it is difficult to find right book or any magazine on book shop; we can get that on internet in easier way such as project Gutenberg website which is the mother of all ebook websites where anyone can read any book. Finally, majority of people use phones for reading stuff online so this is portable and could be take. Anywhere. Furthermore, there are many updates that are made time to time in the reading material as new versions come year by year that can be easily reached on ebooks. Also, information could be shared via WhatsApp or messages easily to other people which is difficult in case of paper books or newspapers.
On the other hand, despite of having a great role of ebooks and technology in life of people, the significance of traditional papers and magazines can not be underestimated. First of all, some people do not know how to use cell phones for searching information online. That is why, people prefer to read papers and buy books from shops to read. In addition to this, most of the old people have habit of reading newspapers in the morning with cup of tea. Therefore, they are not able to leave their habit and use only papers to read. Apart from this, people interrupt where there is no network in this case paper newspapers are preferred by people.
To conclude, although electronic books and modern technology has a lot of benefits to people, yet I think that in some case people still use paper books and other reading stuff.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, apart from, for example, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77283372365 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59712739845 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487119437939 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2456678548 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.222222222 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7222222222 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160425426382 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596905445851 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433824876734 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124740244414 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336115751416 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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