Indeed, it is often argued that parents who do not prefer to send their children in Government financed schools should not be required to pay taxes which support Universal education. However, there are also other number of taxes which are paid by people so I partially agree with this given statement which will be discussed in following paragraphs.
To begin with, in this present century it is a preference of guardians who like to send their children in private schools due to high level of education. Moreover, in well planned schools, there are also numerous activities which are used to teach the students so they can get an opportunity to learn new skills such as sports, cooking, dancing and singing. Furthermore, if parents do not pay taxes to government they can expaend that money in order to bring up their children within better facilities for making their future bright.
Furthermore, paying tax also should be benefited to some extent.If it is mandatory to deposit the tax to government,it helps to the middle class pupils because authority will provide good facilities by that money which students can easily afford who are taking education in Government schools. Moreover, authority also donates dresses and food to students, for an instance, nowadays due to the pandemic covid-19, online classes are going on. If Guardians pay the tax it will help the government to increase the techniques at a faster rate which are needed for the students to get education in a better way.
To conclude I personally believe that it is a responsibility of parents and government that both should take every effort of life which helps the students to maintain their career.
- The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday 78
- The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt 47
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- Families who do not send their children to government financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...h support Universal education. However, there are also other number of taxes which are paid by peopl...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ties for making their future bright. Furthermore, paying tax also should be benefited to...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...also should be benefited to some extent.If it is mandatory to deposit the tax to g...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ndatory to deposit the tax to government,it helps to the middle class pupils becaus...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03584229391 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71329242465 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3542360527 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.111111111 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349200545933 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147086718474 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137023608068 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209511295344 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130894261223 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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