Its is argued by some that Governments should allocate more budget for formal education than on extra-curricular activities. I totally agree with this opinion and in this essay I will state the reasons for my view.
The most compelling reason for holding to my view is that various nations around the world can grow and prosper only if their population is educated. This is because only people who are highly educated can become qualified professionals. For instance,doctors,engineers, these professions require specialized degree and necessary qualifications before they can start working in their respective fields.Therefore countries around the world should encourage and promote conducive environment as well as scholarships to those people who are unable to spend large sum of monies on education due to their poverty.
Another reason is that education plays an indispensable role in an individual's life. It can be considered as an essential requirement for overall development of an individual. Governments should raise awareness through campaigns and seminars for their people to eradicate illiteracy. Recent statistics proved that active involvement of Government to support Non-Profit Organisations to educate general masses has improved the living conditions of their people. Furthermore, this encourages growth and the pursuit of excellence.
Lastly, it is undeniable that sports and recreation is vital for an individual's mental well being and healthy lifestyle. Due to various activities, different age groups benefit in many ways. Experts say that although sports is necessary but its not compulsory requirement for all. Therefore, I would emphasize more on the importance of studies and learning as compared to sports.
In conclusion, while both views are commonly held in society, I believe that Governments should spend more on education as it not only helps to promote growth and excellence, it also provides nation with their basic need of being literate across masses. Given this situation, I would strongly recommend that governments around the world should put in more time and money to educate their people.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , doctors
...me qualified professionals. For instance,doctors,engineers, these professions require sp...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...tart working in their respective fields.Therefore countries around the world should encou...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...tart working in their respective fields.Therefore countries around the world should encou...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ation plays an indispensable role in an individuals life. It can be considered as an essent...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...that sports and recreation is vital for an individuals mental well being and healthy lifestyle...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59384615385 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28942505003 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587692307692 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.3302600136 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257817216365 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797885590557 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668747713585 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151942615224 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854846137706 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , doctors
...me qualified professionals. For instance,doctors,engineers, these professions require sp...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...tart working in their respective fields.Therefore countries around the world should encou...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...tart working in their respective fields.Therefore countries around the world should encou...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ation plays an indispensable role in an individuals life. It can be considered as an essent...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...that sports and recreation is vital for an individuals mental well being and healthy lifestyle...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59384615385 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28942505003 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587692307692 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.3302600136 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257817216365 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797885590557 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668747713585 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151942615224 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854846137706 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.