Most individuals abandoning their homelands to have a new journey overseas are often getting into trouble by homesickness during their living, working, and studying there. I believe traveling for such purposes above requires specific skills to survive as the adaptation of any kind of circumstances needs the experience to overcome.
There are several reasons for having homesickness faced by immigrants. The majority of them have internal addiction to their families, friends, colleagues, etc which causes isolation when it comes to starting a life from scratch. Even if that traveler keeps in touch with his family, the absence of them is the main disaster that gives rise to the missing of the family. Plus, not only addiction but also culture shock makes enough difficulties as it brings isolation because of the language barrier and of more misunderstandings.
As for the improvement of the capabilities to survive, such ways like making more friends, acquaintances, and learning about the culture briefly could reduce the way which makes it hard to adapt. The diversity of cultures is a usual term that is to be comprehended and if people planning to live in another country made close friends within their culture, potential obstacles of strange environment would be prevented. Regarding the absence of dear people, keeping in touch with them frequently through social networks would make the suffering period easier.
To conclude, homesickness, loneliness and many problems that could be witnessed while living in a foreign place are the common issues and I guess observing more from people who have done such challenges successfully is a more efficient way to pass every single issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, if, regarding, so, while, as for, i guess, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30855018587 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92467969702 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650557620818 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9288493759 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.8 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176587738815 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582512840804 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331767970801 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951232976882 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296445599264 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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