You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country - Canada.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to express my interest to attend the upcoming Advanced Oracle Programming seminar to be held in Ontario, Canada in February 2021. Therefore, I am seeking some specific information regarding this event.
Furthermore, I would like to know about the start and end date of the program and times for the same as well so that I can make the arrangement accordingly. Moreover, could you please let me know about the accommodation arrangement for the official? Shall I need to arrange the hotels by own or the organizer will arrange the same? Please confirm this in advance to avoid any confusion. Could you please also provide the topic to be discussed on this program? Finally, what would be the cost to attend the seminar?
I would really appreciate it if you could provide the aforementioned information at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Deepak Sharma
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Suggestion:
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...ementioned information at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Deepak Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9875 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83107753338 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64375 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4951236499 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5454545455 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 4.34317383033 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240900090555 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797396646021 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598094797978 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149565427083 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317878852043 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.