Some people think that the use of animals for experiment is cruel. other think it as good for development of science. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Science has progressed a lot till now will boom in coming years; there are few individuals who believe that for progress of new scientific explorations it is vital to do testing on animals. In contrary, it is considered as cruelty by many people. This essay will describe both views before coming to my opinion.
It is very crucial to keep balance in world and this can only be done by keeping food chain alive, which is naturally created. By doing this type of testing there will be risk of reduction in number of animals. In fact, before a decade ago, frogs in India were reduced to large numbers, which were used for educational purpose. In addition, non reliable drugs testing may produce some virus strains which can produce some detrimental effects and can lead towards extinction of the tested species. To cap it all, it will be considered as act against humanity to use animals for unpredictable scientific purposes.
On the other hand, there are groups of people believe that it is only way to take forward steps in medical research field. Nowadays, world is facing problem of undiscovered drugs. For instance, COVID-19, HIV AIDS, cancer and many more which are still incurable. Consequently, there is essential requirement to test the drugs before local use and for that animals are only option to try on. Along with this, many animals have capability to withstand pain and extreme conditions which helps in study and development of the science.
to conclude and give my opinion, considering the imbalance and threat of extinction of animals, I believe it is in fact, an act considered as cruelty. In spite of requirements of today's world, we should look forward towards developing alternative option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...tudy and development of the science. to conclude and give my opinion, consideri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, may, so, still, for instance, in addition, in fact, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 288.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97569444444 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72191882876 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 106.607317073 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 283.868780488 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4923657655 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5333333333 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.23603664747 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181423356397 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539159440175 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420461789368 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101052306465 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289086640176 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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