our neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear Smith,
I am sorry for the inconvenience caused due to the loud music from our apartment.I have recently received your letter describing the problems that your mom is facing because of the sound at late hours.
As you are already aware that all the roommates in my apartment are music students from the nearby university and we are closing in to attend our final exams.In order for us to do well we had to practice day in and day out on some of our special compositions.
We are all aware this is not a reason for us to cause you any trouble.I would like to be the one to apologies on behalf of all four of us.We have had discussions among us to get to a solutions so that we would no longer cause any issue.
We are planning to add sound proof insulation to one of the rooms in the house and we would be practicing in that room after 9 PM every day.We hope this could resolve the issues that you mentioned in the letter you sent us.
Once again we are all deeply sorry for the trouble.
Yours friendly,
Jay Walter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27179487179 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38069156081 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.7499625636 44.8134815571 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 76.5299724578 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 16.8248392259 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195422864883 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104697392843 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705496708296 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101651689305 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803678959743 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.08 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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