Scientists believe that the world is in danger due to environmental changes. Some people say that personal lifestyle changes should be made to reduce the damages to environment, while other think that the government should do something to help. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
Experts have an opinion that the changes in the environment leads our world towards the great threat. Although, some individuals are of the prospective that variation in an individuals way of living life can reduce the adverse effect on the environment, other believe that bureaucrat should do action to stop the adverse effect on the environment. I opine with the letter view because the government has control over both individuals as well as industries so they can make a huge difference.
On one hand, there are several reasons why one could think that changes in individuals lifestyle can decline the negative effect on environment. The one common reason is that it is a simple and straightforward method to mitigate this problem. A recent survey on newspaper showcased that a common household in India waste 30% of their total use of electricity by forgetting to switching off the appliances when not in use. In other words, if the people of India just add this little change in their lifestyle, it could make a huge difference in total.
On other hand, I believe that the aforementioned opinion is only true if the government make them aware. The most obvious reason why the government should have to do something is that the government have control not only over the common households but also on the large industries. A mere 35% of total pollution is made by the households, the majority of it is done by large industries. That is the reason if the government put strict measures on these giant industries the changes would be drastic.
In recapitulation, despite people varing with their opinion, I strongly believe that bureaucrat should do something because it may affect largely on the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...nment has control over both individuals as well as industries so they can make a huge diff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99651567944 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92913464872 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515679442509 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1118715118 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275757956594 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883987408334 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055605362477 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159556662502 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378586252695 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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