The writer contends that "the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in givernment, industry, or other fields is by instiling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. I concede with the writer's contention.
Addmittedly, the sense of cooperation is cardinal in leadership, without cooperation, the dream of becoming successful leader is almost impossibe. Leadership in general is simply a capacity of making cooperation among the people of diverse area. For example, we can take a leader of a political party, those who have good sense of cooperation, he or she often become successful. In the case of recent election held in United States, the importance of cooperation can be seen. President Trump is defeated because he doesn't have cooperative sense, he thinks he himself is right in any way. He even doesn't belive in Global Warming and withrawn US from the international climate forum. However, Joe Biden seems inclusive and doesn't talk only about a particular group of people, and have good sense of cooperative sense. That can help the world better again.
On the other hand, society must not instilling the sense of competition in order to prepare its young people for leadership. The sense of competition might lead any people in unhealthy activities. The sense of competition is often detrimental in developing good leadership, for example , if any candidate wants to win the election, the sense of competition arouse him to win the election in any means. Thus, he or she attracted towards illicit activities such voter fraud, buying vote by distributing money. The sense of cooperation can help people to be scrupulous leader and that ultlimately helps for the betterment of the society.
Cooperation is often necessary in leadership, it is said that leadership is all about making people unite, despite of diversity in people. A effective leader is whom, who is inclusive not exclusive, who says 'us' instead of I . If we fill the sense of competition, then in order to get success, they use any means, they can just talk about a particular people, they can make false promises in order to win. For the supporting example, Mr. Trump, in US who from a business backround and has a sense of competition, in order to get more votes, he lies often all the time, from making wall on maxico boarder to generating employment in millions.
In industry, the sense of cooperation is very important as well, in order to effiicient industry, if a leader is cooperative, then he can manage all the things meticulously and in a proper way, the sense of competition leads unhealthy market competition.
In sum, I concede with the writer's contention that, the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industrym ar other fields is by instililng in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...on, not competition. I concede with the writers contention. Addmittedly, the sense ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... President Trump is defeated because he doesnt have cooperative sense, he thinks he hi...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...he himself is right in any way. He even doesnt belive in Global Warming and withrawn U...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 722, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... However, Joe Biden seems inclusive and doesnt talk only about a particular group of p...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 826, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...od sense of cooperative sense. That can help the world better again. On the oth...
^^^^
Line 6, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... developing good leadership, for example , if any candidate wants to win the elect...
^^
Line 6, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e election in any means. Thus, he or she attracted towards illicit activities suc...
^^
Line 10, column 140, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
... unite, despite of diversity in people. A effective leader is whom, who is inclus...
^
Line 10, column 224, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... not exclusive, who says us instead of I . If we fill the sense of competition, th...
^^
Line 10, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et success, they use any means, they can just talk about a particular people, the...
^^
Line 10, column 514, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ackround and has a sense of competition, in order to get more votes, he lies ofte...
^^
Line 10, column 547, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'lies'.
Suggestion: often lies
...tition, in order to get more votes, he lies often all the time, from making wall on maxi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 588, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies often all the time, from making wall on maxico boarder to generating employme...
^^
Line 12, column 178, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... manage all the things meticulously and in a proper way, the sense of competition leads unhealt...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se of competition leads unhealthy market competition. In sum, I concede with t...
^^^
Line 14, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...petition. In sum, I concede with the writers contention that, the best way for a soc...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2408.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03765690377 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00387481245 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460251046025 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6917418464 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7619047619 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292755330138 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992817158679 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123006168939 0.0758088955206 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203722382278 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122408226245 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...on, not competition. I concede with the writers contention. Addmittedly, the sense ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... President Trump is defeated because he doesnt have cooperative sense, he thinks he hi...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...he himself is right in any way. He even doesnt belive in Global Warming and withrawn U...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 722, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... However, Joe Biden seems inclusive and doesnt talk only about a particular group of p...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 826, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...od sense of cooperative sense. That can help the world better again. On the oth...
^^^^
Line 6, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... developing good leadership, for example , if any candidate wants to win the elect...
^^
Line 6, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e election in any means. Thus, he or she attracted towards illicit activities suc...
^^
Line 10, column 140, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
... unite, despite of diversity in people. A effective leader is whom, who is inclus...
^
Line 10, column 224, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... not exclusive, who says us instead of I . If we fill the sense of competition, th...
^^
Line 10, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et success, they use any means, they can just talk about a particular people, the...
^^
Line 10, column 514, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ackround and has a sense of competition, in order to get more votes, he lies ofte...
^^
Line 10, column 547, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'lies'.
Suggestion: often lies
...tition, in order to get more votes, he lies often all the time, from making wall on maxi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 588, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies often all the time, from making wall on maxico boarder to generating employme...
^^
Line 12, column 178, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... manage all the things meticulously and in a proper way, the sense of competition leads unhealt...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se of competition leads unhealthy market competition. In sum, I concede with t...
^^^
Line 14, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...petition. In sum, I concede with the writers contention that, the best way for a soc...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2408.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03765690377 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00387481245 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460251046025 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6917418464 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7619047619 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292755330138 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992817158679 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123006168939 0.0758088955206 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203722382278 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122408226245 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.