You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get-well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and:
thank them for supporting you
describe how you spend your time
explain your recovery process
Hello Team,
Thank you guys for such surprises! I’m really missing office after seeing the greeting cards and amazing quotes you’ve written in them. Feeling blessed to have such encouraging teammates!
While I’m recovering, I’d like to thank every one of you especially my manager to understand the situation and sanctioning me a month's leaves. I know all of my due work is completed and submitted to the client.
Generally, I don’t have much to look after these days in the house as my parents are doing all the errands and daily chores. As soon as I received the new IPad for which I was dying out, I started binge-watching famous Netflix series like Dark, and many more.
The good news! my plaster cast will be removed next week, and I’m really excited to join the office after the next week. All my vitals are good and just joined the physiotherapy sessions to get on my toes again.
Thanks again for the gifts and for showing me your tremendous love!
With love,
Apoorva
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... Dark, and many more. The good news! my plaster cast will be removed next week,...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82658959538 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45876141615 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676300578035 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4095086876 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161510931697 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060904476542 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733720659835 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930184373492 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754928004553 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.