Internet is the major source of information and communication nowadays. With the invention of the internet, the world has become a global village where you can contact anyone sitting in a faraway country from you. Some people argued that the content on the internet should be controlled whereas others think that it should be available and accessible to everyone without any exception. I think there should be interference to what people can see and access on the internet.
To start with, The life without internet is unimaginable. People share their thoughts and life events on the internet and they do not want any control of anyone over that. They want uncontrolled internet where they can see and do what they want. As if internet be controlled by Government, you will not be able to share your thoughts about their policies and will not be able to start any campaign against them as they would have full control over what you can see and share with others.
On the other hand, there is some content that should not be openly available. For example, Adult movies have bad effect on people's health and on their behavior. moreover, if internet is not being controlled then anyone can access of anyone's personal life therefore it is important to protect people's privacy.
In conclusion, people want uninterfered internet so that they can do what the want without any accountability. In my opinion, there should be controlled internet to protect the privacy and to prevent young generation to watch content that they should not, to protect their innocence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The word 'anyone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'sit'.
Suggestion: sit
...al village where you can contact anyone sitting in a faraway country from you. Some peo...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...n peoples health and on their behavior. moreover, if internet is not being controlled th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98091603053 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65000140182 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477099236641 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2918324005 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251128675964 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113390066172 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763456349349 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179453459187 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747032851425 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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