The line graph and table illustrate that weather temperatures and sunshine hours in 3 side of the world in a year.
It is clear that Sydney is a hotter city at the beginning and end of the year than other cities. We can also see that sunshine hours of London 2 times fewer than others. Similar to London, New York’s degree peaks at the top of temperature in the summer months
Overall , in January, temperatures of Sydney is 26°, at that time temperatures of London and New York 8° and 4° respectively. After 6 months, New York's temperature peaks considerably to 29°. Temperature in London rises to 23° at that moment. By contrast, in Sydney, temperature falls rapidly to 16°.
New York is considered the most sunny city in 3 cities above. There is 2535 sunshine hours. Similar to that Sydney has 2473 sunny hours. However, in London has much fewer hours of sunshine. It is believed that only 1180 hours of sunshine.
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars 61
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its constructions in 1950 63
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 87
- some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that improve our lives Which viewpoint do you agree Use specific reasons and examples to suppport your answer 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...emperature in the summer months Overall , in January, temperatures of Sydney is 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68711656442 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66476669872 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558282208589 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9667545949 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6666666667 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5833333333 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204764739441 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779871689082 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640437754498 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150442964173 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743521884149 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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