Some people think that is more important to plant trees in open areas in towns and cities then provide housing facilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Indubitably, our world is experiencing environmental crisis because of which a statement has become the crux of the matter whether the vacant land in city’s should be used to plant trees rather than for accommodation. I concurred completely with the given proclamation.
There are myriad Of reasons why over planting trees. Initially, planting trees has a number of environmental, communal and economical benefits. As, the present era Witnesses of several air pollution that creates respiratory problems. These trees absorb the harmful gases from the environment and provide humans with fresh air. Augmentation to it, as the number of greenhouse gases is on hike, but the plants play role of life saver which can reduce the high-temperature. Hence, it can be concluded that planting trees will have to be encouraged.
Besides, as we want, please provided additional necessity such as shelters, medicines and tools. The city dwellers, to get enormous benefits from the trees if parks and gardens are constructed.
Although, more real Estates need to be built for sustainable development. Exemplify, due to scarcity of housing amenities the renting or owing of any apartment has become unaffordable. Hence, to come back with such kind of problem which were once a root of illicit activities in some countries, it is mandatory to build houses. Whereupon, the public will live in an ideal society.
Conclusively, it is evident that house is among the basic necessities; yet I firmly believe that lawmakers ought to be concerned of the major issues that are being faced by the fast paced society. Therefore, more and more plants should be grown in cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...a number of environmental, communal and economical benefits. As, the present era Witnesses...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ntal, communal and economical benefits. As, the present era Witnesses of several a...
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Line 10, column 53, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
..., it is evident that house is among the basic necessities; yet I firmly believe that lawmakers ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26691729323 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0277164834 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661654135338 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4232237026 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150079575742 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452468995702 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334736836359 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755600989834 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176345439492 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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