In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governmens to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extend do you agree or disagree
In certain countries, majourity of people have a deal with the health impact that induced, indeedly in the way of lots of fast food consumptions. Thus, state authority wants to heighten a tax for consuming fast prepared meals. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this view, because this type of act will scare away the middle and lower income groups.
To begin with,the importance of imposing a higher tax will make fast foods unapproachable to poor people, this will give them energy and addition to cook proper foods at home. While this might cause them some discommode, it is of course, good for their health. However, the taxes will not oppose inflow consumers from buying street's fast prepared food. The government will continue to consume it, that means, increasing the tax on fast food will have only a critical effect on its consumption, notion and finding solution to this type of problem.
Undoubtedly, the creating awareness about that ill-effects of fast foods are also unthinkable. Majourity of people, who consume the fast foods are actually would aware of its health consequences. For instance, some of the developed countries in the world, people have compellation about buying the fast foods, because of their busy schedule even though, which they are aware of the health problems.
Perhaps, a better solution is to make healthy food more acceptable and available, one of the main reasons are that, increase the consumption of fast foods are that can be cooked in a matter of minutes. Ready-to-eat meals are available also in supermarkets. As a result of markets, many people are consuming fast foods, because there are healthier alternativesand which they are not handily acceptable.
To conclude, I would say that, increasing the tax on the fast foods, will only dissuade the low income groups from buying them. If the governments, really want to support healthy lifestyle of citizens, of the country they live, they should just pay their attentions for charity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, really, so, thus, while, for instance, of course, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09174311927 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74085629027 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553516819572 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6240677226 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297241615573 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101110896479 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357433743367 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161237640452 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476893392885 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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