Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in volunteering English classes in India, which your company organizes in the upcoming month.
I am a native speaker of English and I have mastered the language with Masters of Arts in English literature in the year 2018. I have experience of teaching the language to 12th grade students for almost 5 years, which I felt would be useful for the voluntary work in elementary schools.
Actually, I have couple of my friends in India with whom I can accommodate for the maximum of 2 months and hence I have chosen the place to do my voluntary work.
The reasons behind my interest in teaching the language is I am so fond of the language and I wanted to upscale my teaching skills as I felt developing countries are the most challenging places for it.
I am eagerly looking forward for your responses soon, as it would be helpful for me to plan my trip.
Yours faithfully,
Rajeev Sundarrajan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in English literature in the year 2018. I have experience of teaching the languag...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'coupled'.
Suggestion: coupled
...elementary schools. Actually, I have couple of my friends in India with whom I can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72941176471 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74130269843 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5580467735 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15858630775 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708141024905 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373829850039 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876303756619 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412554328676 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.