In some regions as increasing number of humans are suffering from health problems as a result of eating more much fast food . It is therefore elementary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food .
The demond for fast food growing rapidly . That is why the number of places selling fast food is increasing . Fast food has its good sides . For example it is cheap and affordable . Nowadays , fast food is very developed abroad . Everyone has probably heard of the most popular fast food MCdonalds in foreign countries .
The downsides of fast food are also many . Many diseases are coused by the high consumption of this type of products in foreign countries . Fast food products cause weight again in many people and many people suffer from this type of diseases both abroad and in our country . I do not think there is a benefit to raising taxes on this type of products . Because with the introduction of additional taxes on this type of products , fast food products will also raise the price of fast food . Most people today know what means to consume a lot of this type of products . So most people are in favor of eating hot and quality products made at home .
To conclude , I would say that , I do not agree with this opinion . Because it can only be bad for their citizens if countries add additional taxes . There is no need to introduce additional taxes now , many people have stopped eating fast food .
In some regions as increasing number of humans are suffering from health problems as a result of eating more much fast food . It is therefore elementary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food .
The demond for fast food growing rapidly . That is why the number of places selling fast food is increasing . Fast food has its good sides . For example it is cheap and affordable . Nowadays , fast food is very developed abroad . Everyone has probably heard of the most popular fast food MCdonalds in foreign countries .
The downsides of fast food are also many . Many diseases are coused by the high consumption of this type of products in foreign countries . Fast food products cause weight again in many people and many people suffer from this type of diseases both abroad and in our country . I do not think there is a benefit to raising taxes on this type of products . Because with the introduction of additional taxes on this type of products , fast food products will also raise the price of fast food . Most people today know what means to consume a lot of this type of products . So most people are in favor of eating hot and quality products made at home .
To conclude , I would say that , I do not agree with this opinion . Because it can only be bad for their citizens if countries add additional taxes . There is no need to introduce additional taxes now , many people have stopped eating fast food .
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- In some regions as increasing number of humans are suffering from health problems as a result of eating more much fast food It is therefore elementary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food The demond for fast food growing rapidly Tha 56
- The chart lower gives information on the percentage of British persons give money to helping hand by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 The least charitable were those ages 18 to 25 years In 2010 10 percent less donations were made than in 1990 In 1990
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65338645418 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43968206756 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509960159363 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9268851038 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8888888889 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9444444444 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.540551666337 0.244688304435 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198134043419 0.084324248473 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175371091452 0.0667982634062 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.419007384854 0.151304729494 277% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.28558564288 0.056905535591 502% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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