In some regions as increasing number of humans are suffering from health problems as a result of eating more much fast food It is therefore elementary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food The demond for fast food growing rapidly Tha

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In some regions as increasing number of humans are suffering from health problems as a result of eating more much fast food . It is therefore elementary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food .

The demond for fast food growing rapidly . That is why the number of places selling fast food is increasing . Fast food has its good sides . For example it is cheap and affordable . Nowadays , fast food is very developed abroad . Everyone has probably heard of the most popular fast food MCdonalds in foreign countries .

The downsides of fast food are also many . Many diseases are coused by the high consumption of this type of products in foreign countries . Fast food products cause weight again in many people and many people suffer from this type of diseases both abroad and in our country . I do not think there is a benefit to raising taxes on this type of products . Because with the introduction of additional taxes on this type of products , fast food products will also raise the price of fast food . Most people today know what means to consume a lot of this type of products . So most people are in favor of eating hot and quality products made at home .

To conclude , I would say that , I do not agree with this opinion . Because it can only be bad for their citizens if countries add additional taxes . There is no need to introduce additional taxes now , many people have stopped eating fast food .

In some regions as increasing number of humans are suffering from health problems as a result of eating more much fast food . It is therefore elementary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food .

The demond for fast food growing rapidly . That is why the number of places selling fast food is increasing . Fast food has its good sides . For example it is cheap and affordable . Nowadays , fast food is very developed abroad . Everyone has probably heard of the most popular fast food MCdonalds in foreign countries .

The downsides of fast food are also many . Many diseases are coused by the high consumption of this type of products in foreign countries . Fast food products cause weight again in many people and many people suffer from this type of diseases both abroad and in our country . I do not think there is a benefit to raising taxes on this type of products . Because with the introduction of additional taxes on this type of products , fast food products will also raise the price of fast food . Most people today know what means to consume a lot of this type of products . So most people are in favor of eating hot and quality products made at home .

To conclude , I would say that , I do not agree with this opinion . Because it can only be bad for their citizens if countries add additional taxes . There is no need to introduce additional taxes now , many people have stopped eating fast food .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, kind of, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65338645418 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43968206756 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509960159363 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9268851038 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8888888889 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9444444444 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.540551666337 0.244688304435 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198134043419 0.084324248473 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175371091452 0.0667982634062 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.419007384854 0.151304729494 277% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.28558564288 0.056905535591 502% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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