The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
The line graph and table chart depicts the information regarding water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries namely Brazil and Congo during the given time period from 1900 to 2000. The data is calibrated in km3.
Overall, the most striking feature apparent from this presentation is that the largest quantity of water used by agriculture sector. However, the uncausal feature that cannot be ignored that the lowest quantity of water used by domestic sector.
In line graph, the maximum quantity of water is used by agriculture sector. In 1900, 500 km3 water is used by agriculture sector. After, it was continuously inclined at the peak of 3000 km3 in 2000. In industrial and domestic sectors in 1900 the water uses was the least. But following the year it increasd 1000 km3 respectively in 2000.
Turning to table chart, in Brazil the population was 176 millon. The water consumption for irrigated land was 26500 km2 and 359 m3 consumed by per person. The population was 5.2 million in democractic republic of congo. The water consumption was 100 km2 for irrigated land and per person was 8 m3 than Brazil.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m3 water is used by agriculture sector. After, it was continuously inclined at the pe...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...llion in democractic republic of congo. The water consumption was 100 km2 for irrig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97905759162 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67493669335 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534031413613 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2400858436 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1538461538 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33474601961 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117236861247 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123474781387 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218258852214 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129025266047 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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