Dear Sir,
Greetings for the day! I am writing this letter to nominate a person, for an award that your newspaper honors to appreciate the noble voluntary work. The person’s name is Louis Prastil and he is the president of our community council.
At the onset, I highly believe that Mr. Louis could win this award. He is the president of our local community council. He is a doctor by profession and working as a full-time doctor, and part time volunteer worker at a community hospital. Despite of working at the community hospital, he serves humanity in collaboration with many non-governmental organizations.
Further, I could tell a lot about Mr. Louis as I have known him for about 10 years now. As we live in the same community, I have seen him helping the community over many years. Although we do not live in the same area, we at least meet twice a week, for various arrangements to help the society. Also, we often meet at the community functions and events. As I too like to be a part of the volunteer work, our paths cross on frequent basis and I have privileged to work with him on many social events.
Lastly, I would like to tell you a recent example of his help to the neighborhood. Since, he is the president of our community council, he knows almost everybody in the society and everyone around him loves him for what he does for all of us. Recently, because of the heavy rain fall in our region, many houses were damaged and many of our community members were highly affected by the calamity. After the storm, Louis himself had visited all the affected houses and asked for any sort of help anybody needed. He supplied food packets, distributed medical first-aid kits to all the impacted families, and arranged shelter for their stay. In fact, he also took an aged couple to his home. Mr. Louis is not only our hero, but also pride and great inspiration of the community.
Hope you will see his dedication towards the community and humanity, and select him for your prestigious award.
Thank you, 1/12/2021
Judy Ross
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Greetings for the day! I am writing this...
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Suggestion: part-time
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your prestigious award. Thank you, 1/12/2021 ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 1/12/2021 Judy Ross
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, lastly, so, at least, in fact, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 937.175257732 181% => OK
No of words: 362.0 206.0 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67403314917 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64172759821 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 127.690721649 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538674033149 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 290.88556701 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1884569142 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144593161994 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046383938188 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370734975528 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800146638343 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292195400779 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 41.2886597938 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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