Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In the 20th century, it was very common trend for worker joining a corporation as college graduate, spent 40 years in same corporation and retire with golden watch. In recent times, this is quite rare and people generally do multiple jobs in various companies in their dynamic career.
In old days, jobs were more permanent in nature, with most of the people doing same thing every day, with very steady career growth and financial benefits. Corporations tend to invest years in fresh college graduates to train them and mold according to the culture of the organizations. Nowadays, jobs are more dynamoc in nature. Hirings are mostly project based and contratual in nature. Since, these hiring does not guarantee long term visibility to hirees, it is compensated by higher salary. In a world, where consumerism is on constant rise, people choose higher wages and wide experience than that of a a stable salary and monotonous job.
Fast paced advancement of technology is another factor which influence ways of working of organisations which makes several jobs outdated and create new job opportunities. A research has shown that there are thousands of job profiles which used to exist a two decades ago disappeared in last two years. Similary, there are thousands of roles created in last decades whoch never existed in history. For example- Rapid implementation of automation in various sector depleted several manual jobs and other hand it created new jobs like automation engineers and manitenance staffs. Due to this dynamic disruption by technology, people constantly upskill and reskill themselves and adopt to new ways of working.
Career span of human normaly is four decade longs. Generally, when a graduate starts a career, he may not be able to completely undersatnd what is his competency and really like to do. This can happen for various reasons, for example, for financial reason he or she may join a job which is more rewarding financially even though it is not what gives her outmost satisfaction. Down the line when people get more experience, they understand more aboit their inner self and find out which career path will give them holositic satisfaction and tend to follow that path.
Finally, I believe that trend of single career is outdated and as a human we need to be more agile to remain relevant to the fast changing world and at the same time keep ourselves satisfied and happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s companies in their dynamic career. In old days, jobs were more permanent in n...
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Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
... wages and wide experience than that of a a stable salary and monotonous job. Fa...
^^^
Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... wages and wide experience than that of a a stable salary and monotonous job. ...
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Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
... wages and wide experience than that of a a stable salary and monotonous job. Fa...
^^^
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
...dated and create new job opportunities. A research has shown that there are thousands of j...
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Line 5, column 678, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...ntly upskill and reskill themselves and adopt to new ways of working. Career span of ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, may, really, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03740648379 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71000616826 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608478802993 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8569203817 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05555555556 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099907518321 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298908555991 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304675403 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555312720806 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136333452044 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.