Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In the era of internet, all kind of music is available to choose from. There are the group of people who listen only traditional music while other group feels traditional is outfashioned and international music is our future. However, there also exists set of people who strike a right balance and enjoy both style of music.
In today's fast and stressful life, music is a major stress buster. Music is an antioxidant for mind and flush all our worries and tensions. Music also helps to connect poeple and vital medium to express and understand tradition, culture and feelings.
By getting acquainted with traditional music, new generation understand their own culture. Generally traditional music is centuries old and passed from one generation to another generation, to keep tradition alive. If people stops supporting traditional music, it won't survive and our centuries old asset will be destroyed. In recent times, musicians come with innovative idea to present old music in new form to make it more attractive for younger generation. This is a very welcome steps and help to promote traditional music and at the same time keep younger generation engaged. For example: Popular rap form is being used to sing folk songs to target youngsters.
On the other hand, in era of globalization, people across the globe are coming together as one family. Good music is being listned and appreciated across the world. International music helps to connect people from different nations as well as a medium to understand foriegn culture. This also provide choice and access to listner to the best music in the world.
In my view, people should be open to both local and interntaional music. Local music will always remind them from where they come from at the same time international music will help them to thrive in the global world. Musicians, alternatively, should come together to fuse internation and traditional music to take listner's entertairnment to next level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: groups
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Suggestion:
...ve idea to present old music in new form to make it more attractive for younger g...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o sing folk songs to target youngsters. On the other hand, in era of globalizati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, for example, kind of, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12111801242 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80678859 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537267080745 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8459354643 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.7894736842 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28526782718 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101655276916 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417470150372 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173872420591 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134303385393 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.