Write a letter to your English-speaking friend telling him/her about a local event that is to
take place in your town, which would be useful to her/him. In your letter
- Mention the event
- What are the activities involved
- Mention the arrangements you would make for his/her stay
Dear Akshay,
Hello!!! I hope you are in pink of your health. On 3rd and 4th of April, there is an event about sealing and fastener industries. As it is a weekend, I have already taken the tickets for you and me to attend the event.
The event starts with Make In India vision, consecutively, there will be many exhibitors showcasing their products on respective counters for two days. There is a lecture by Dr Darshan Parekh, the CEO of PGE India and also among the board of directors for Fluid Association of India, about the reducing usages of asbestos products and switching completely towards non-asbestos alternatives and to safeguard the environment and human life. Furthermore, on Sunday Dr Akshay Kulkarni, the research scientist, is delivering the lecture about the fasteners application and new technological development in Indian industries.
The event is at Thakare Hall, close to my apartment; to avoid travelling in the traffic, you can opt to stay at my place. Saturday night we can visit your favourite restaurant, Malhra Cuisines, and on Sunday we can enjoy a football match in the lounge with my couple of my other friends.
Let me know about any changes you want with the arrangements, excited to see you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'fasteners'' or 'fastener's'?
Suggestion: fasteners'; fastener's
...st, is delivering the lecture about the fasteners application and new technological devel...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00471698113 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92855398521 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8633666523 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142969497508 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622099733713 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330124190332 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802496427027 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440718697631 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.