Write a letter to an electronics company requesting information about their latest model of digital camera you have seen advertised. Ask about the following items:
• the price and availability of the new camera
• the exact size and special functions of the set
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to request you a detailed information about the Nikon D5300, the advertisement of the same was featured for the first time on television yesterday.
The moment I saw the latest Nikon DSLR I was very excited as I was planning to buy one for my brother. The promotional advertisement did not mention the details of the price and launch date. Since my brother will be promoted next month, I am planning to gift him during that course of time. It would be great if you can please inform me about the same.
Besides this, it would be of an immense help if your response also consists of the details regarding the screen size and resolution. It showed that the screen is the biggest in the market but there was not any exact specification. Not only the screen size but also the wi-fi connection mentioned was of interest to me. Can we really share the pictures on the go? Kindly please provide more details towards the same.
Awaiting your prompt response.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
Noah K.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...response. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Noah K.
^^^
Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you. Yours faithfully, Noah K.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64864864865 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55272523705 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3685037544 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134780888293 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429372588388 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512945070417 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793060921385 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680833797935 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.