You eat at your college cafeteria every lunch time. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college principal. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria. Say what is wrong with it. Suggest how it could be improved.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am frequent visitor at cafeteria. I really like the place especially the side corner which not only provide the outer view of college garden but also refreshes the mind.
However, there are few things which, I really think need to be improved in the café. Firstly, the chairs in cafeteria is not comfortable enough it urgently needed a replacement. Secondly, café must offers coupon codes to needy students for this they can raise funds from Student welfare association. In this way each and every student will able to avail the facilities which will provide them lifelong memories.
Lastly, the lunch corner of canteen is not big enough to accommodate more than 10 students at time due to which there are always huge crowd on peak hours so for this café management must expand that section and proper queues instructions will be followed to avoid the rush. I hope above mentioned tips will help in the betterment of cafeteria.
Yours faithfully,
Pallavi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'offers'' or 'offer's'?
Suggestion: offers'; offer's
...eded a replacement. Secondly, café must offers coupon codes to needy students for this...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'crowds'?
Suggestion: crowds
...time due to which there are always huge crowd on peak hours so for this café manageme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57022140536 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713414634146 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0739411415 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1111111111 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133794569544 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605712814764 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359281563801 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825255170839 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140272043674 0.0580467560999 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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