The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing .
Do you agree or disagree ?
Gone are the days ,when physical store was pondered by people; however this attitude of people has undergone a sea change ever since advancement in technology came in limelight .As,majority of masses have predilection towards online shopping because of its convenience. A section of society adheres that e-commerce companies will definitely mar down the business of offline, but others are deny . I agree with formar statement owing to several reasons , elucidated in upcoming fragments.
First and foremost reason of why people prefer online sites is ,it consumes less time. To illustrate, majority of masses are engaged in their graveyard shift; thus, have no adequate time for buying things. In such situation, they can purchase any product through internet by signal click rather than spending a lot of time by visiting at particular place. Spain, For example ,a European country ,revealed that 88% population of this nation use flip karts ,Myntra and many more in order to buy goods. As a result,apart from saving time,this practice requires the less money. Similarly , getting discount is also a prominent benefit of e-commerce companies. To be more precise, these companies have large capital base and lower overhead cost . In this case, people can get things with lower price as well as discount ,which is boon for poor section of society. Hence , everyone can purchase goods easily ,without facing any cost problem.
Likewise, e- shopping is boon for people in pandemic time period, as it is more accessible in such situation as campared to retail shops. Covid 19 ,For instance, a time period , when, every physical shop was closed by civic bodies,in order to take care of people . The survey is conducted,which revealed that 92% people fulfilled their rudimentary requirements via online sites . Consequently, no one faced any kind of crisis such as starvation in that time. Not only this but these shops are available in mammoth dimensions. By this I mean , one can purchase various things along with seeing things at same time with fast and reliable delivery channels ,whereas, he/she can buy only single product at one place through traditional shops . In addition, people have no headache of changing products in such method as well,since they can return and replace goods along with receiving refund.
To recapitulate, I vehemently vouch that e-commerce companies will acquire the entire market share in future because they provide exceptional client service and are efficiently. Therefore, online shopping is wise idea for buying things ,as it has more advantages,which are considered worth in this technological era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28468899522 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81506570843 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617224880383 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9395480678 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.19047619 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123962373253 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352097879621 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369723426121 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848188393584 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456538596471 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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