It is believed by some individuals that free time should be effectively utilized to improve the cognitive ability of our mind, whereas others think that it is of utmost importance to give some time off to our mind to relax. Both the contrasting views are discussed in this essay, and I opine that people should spend their leisure time in those activities which add some value in their lives and enhance their personality.
People spend most of their time doing things which develop their mind, like working in offices or studying in colleges. They work all day and night to horn their skills, therefore get a little time to refresh their minds. This leisure time should be spent efficiently only to rejuvenate our brains without putting any stress on it for learning new things. Furthermore, it is believed that learning is an everyday process, that’s why spending quality time with friends and family members should be the priority of any person. For instance, people working in multi-national companies, take at least one month's holiday to go to a tourist destination with their family members. This helps them to calm their minds minds and spend quality time with their loved ones.
On the contrary, some people believe that every moment of our life should be utilized effectively to enhance our cognitive thinking, and individuals should do some recreational activities, like solving puzzles or playing chess, in their leisure time. Additionally, they believe that, with increasing competition in innovation, it is imperative to have the critical thinking, which allows people to solve conundrum tasks with ease in their daily lives. For the above reasons, many entrepreneurs, for example, read books or novels in their free time, to constantly enhance their knowledge, and fill their brains with beautiful thoughts.
In a nutshell, few individuals opine that free time should be spent only to rejuvenate our mind without focusing on knowledge acquisition; on the other hand, some people believe that every free moment of our life should be attributed to gaining knowledge and sharping our mind. I opine that people should make the best use of their time and indulge in those activities that would help them to become a better person, and enhance their personality. Even if they are on vacations, their learning should not be stopped.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, whereas, at least, for example, for instance, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11780104712 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67142588681 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9315658905 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.642857143 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253014446391 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104503857674 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593734212434 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185975853623 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303385878018 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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