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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, every single person become a vegan because they do not want to kill animals for hunger. I am totally agree with this idea as firstly, vegetarian food have all important minerals and secondly for humanity

In today's world every humans want to become a healthy person because of this in every day ample number of animals kill. Because there is a great myth that meat has a great way to be a healthy. On the other hand the truth is that being vegan is more benefits because vagetables has a great source of balanced diet . Moreover in vegetarian people have so many choices of food in which they can consume diffrent type of meals . Although it is also true that animals are quite danger for human because sometime, equatic meals such as fish or other species are very toxic and people eat quite often in 2008 google surveyed that in japan or in china more than 6 lack people died because of eating toxic fish

Furthermore, humans are the only species which are very kind and understand the meaning of life . However, its also seem that in every side of the world mankind kill animals only for being healthy in society .Animals have also right to live in the world as like humans on the other hand yes health is a top notch need of society so because of this nature give plants , vegetables, fruits and these are full of amino acids and we can say that good for balanced diet . Actually in some places such as china people eat domestic animals like dog's or cats that are very cruel

To conclude, every animals have equal right to like as much as human , we can not kill them just for being health because humans have also so many alternative options

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actually, also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51495016611 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13614234493 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514950166113 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.114814376 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.875 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.625 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 5.01903807615 936% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201972267265 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971025739057 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385699234697 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129231047027 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056677372438 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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