Dear sir or madam,
I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement publised last month in leading australian magazine where asked for short term care giver forsix year old child.
I have proper experience to take care of your child.i would like to take your job because i am so confident enough to raise the child in proper way.Apart from that i lok after many of my siblings previsly.
I find children so special because of their beheviour and moreover i have managing skills and bringing them in right way of understanding. It will help them in concentrating things very easily and do the work accordingly.
considering children give me greater joy.
By the way,i recently landed australia from my home country.while i am in australia i would love to explore the country and learn about culture and life style of the people,in addition taking care of your child will be great offer.
Yours faithfully
vinay varad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, in addition, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94339622642 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7395261922 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698113207547 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5086155376 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 4.34317383033 240% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194816714902 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711182619776 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715701605402 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940523517734 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814625281585 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.