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13 Which area the government should fund to improve children s education 1 hiring more teachers to teach in a small class 2 preschool education before kinder garten 3 providing some training courses so that teachers can be more professional

Education has a significant effect on our live. It often determines our level of success. Everyone realizes that improving our skills and abilities is a great way to ensure more prosperous life. Some people believe that preschool education is one of the most effective way to improve our education and abilities. Others disagree. I believe that hiring more teachers is more advantageous and beneficial to the students. I feel this way for two important reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

Primarily teachers are there for guidance in a particular field or subject. They give you a systematic and better way to approach a subject. A teacher normally teaches a subject in which he or she has expertise. Hence that person has made a study of the subject and can guide you in order to help you approach the subject in a better way.This guidance may be in the form of giving you names of reference books or giving you notes. Without a teacher it would be extremely cumbersome to go through large libraries for a certain topic. Besides this the teacher could provide you help with any sort of problem that you come across while studying. The teacher could provide you strategies that help you solve a problem. Without a teacher, this problem would take up a lot of your valuable time or remain unsolved. Teachers can also point out when you are going wrong. They point out
our mistakes and suggest ways for us to correct them.

It does depend on the individual person to finally getting down to learn a subject. The actual studying has to be done by the individual. But the learning process can be made much simpler with the proper and continuous guidance of teachers. Hence it betters to learn with the help of a teacher rather than learning by you. Depending upon their abilities and demands of the subject people plan to study, different people have different ideas about the need of teachers. Some people think that they can learn better with the help of books and computers. Certainly, modern technology has made our lives easier in every aspect. Today, computers have almost eliminated the need of most paperback books. Students can get the study materials over the Internet now. But in my opinion, no matter how advance the technologies may become, the need of a good teacher can't ever be over-stated Whenever we are reading a new topic or new subject, questions regarding that topic start to appear in our minds. We need someone to answer them all and tell us more about them. At those moments, we actually need a concerned teacher who can help us by answer those questions based upon his own experiences. In fact, a teacher can be a person who knows things better than us. For example, in my opinion parents are the best teachers throughout our lives. They teach us from taking the first steps to good manners, learning lessons from life to the accumulation of knowledge.

No one can deny their important part in building our characters. In old times of kingdoms, royalties were provided with the best teachers of their times to
make them expert in every field of life. Even today, teachers, at home teach many intelligent students. It is an old saying that the knowledge from experience is far more relevant than the knowledge from books. Books make you see the lines only whereas a teacher can take you beyond those lines in to a practical world.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...bject in which he or she has expertise. Hence that person has made a study of the sub...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ou approach the subject in a better way.This guidance may be in the form of giving y...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'name'
Suggestion: name
...idance may be in the form of giving you names of reference books or giving you notes....
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'note'
Suggestion: note
... names of reference books or giving you notes. Without a teacher it would be extremel...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...er and continuous guidance of teachers. Hence it betters to learn with the help of a ...
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Line 6, column 508, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
.... Some people think that they can learn better with the help of books and computers. C...
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Line 6, column 856, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... may become, the need of a good teacher cant ever be over-stated Whenever we are rea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, regarding, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, i feel, in fact, sort of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 52.1666666667 163% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2797.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 587.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76490630324 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53681511539 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487223168654 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 862.2 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.6003584229 175% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1005093237 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6944444444 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3055555556 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208117394092 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539014990883 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504059025777 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098860810616 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648191318396 0.0645574589148 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, regarding, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, i feel, in fact, sort of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments