The chart below show the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

Essay topics:

The chart below show the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The graph illustrates information about drinking of coffee and tea and how people drink them in Sydney,Melbourne,Brisbane,Adelaide and Hobart.

Overall, drinking a coffee and going to cafe for coffee or tea is the most popular way of drinking in most cities Adelaide, while buy fresh coffee is the least used ways in all cities.

According to the chart Melbourne,Sydney and Hobart are the most likely to drink tea or coffee in the cafe with more than 60% in last 4 weeks.
Instant coffee is second popular way of drinking.Brisbane shown nearly 60% in instant coffee.In Hobart and nearly 50% in Adelaide.It is higher result in Sydney with 44% and in Melbourne with 42% in last 4 weeks.

Bought a fresh coffee showed the lowest degree with 45% in last 4 weeks in Brisbane.Almost the same result contained in Hobart and Melbourne with 65%.

Totally, Australian people prefered to going to cafe for coffee and tea than other habits in last 4 weeks.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Melbourne
... tea and how people drink them in Sydney,Melbourne,Brisbane,Adelaide and Hobart. Overal...
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Suggestion: , Adelaide
... drink them in Sydney,Melbourne,Brisbane,Adelaide and Hobart. Overall, drinking a coff...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Sydney
...ies. According to the chart Melbourne,Sydney and Hobart are the most likely to drink...
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Suggestion: Brisbane
...offee is second popular way of drinking.Brisbane shown nearly 60% in instant coffee.In H...
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Suggestion: In
...bane shown nearly 60% in instant coffee.In Hobart and nearly 50% in Adelaide.It is...
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Suggestion: It
...ee.In Hobart and nearly 50% in Adelaide.It is higher result in Sydney with 44% and...
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Suggestion: Almost
...ee with 45% in last 4 weeks in Brisbane.Almost the same result contained in Hobart and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91358024691 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55527690952 2.65546596893 134% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493827160494 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.5790940252 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298342686544 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156772094941 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680294694012 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156772094941 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680294694012 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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