In the modern world, owning a house or property is very profitable for people, and renting is important for people who do not always live in a particular city. In this text, I'm going to explain the positive and negative aspects of this problem.
On the one hand, renting is also convenient and comfortable for people because they will not have problems with utilities and other payment systems. Many immigrants in large states live in rent because they live in a rent convenient to them in a financial situation and they will not face various problems. The best side to get a rental house is for immigrants and for tourists who live in a rental on certain days and it is profitable for them. At the same time there are bad sides for example for local residents it is a big problem to live in rent because they will live there for a long time and it will be very expensive for them.
On the other hand, owning a house is very comfortable and profitable for people because if a person owns a house, he spends less money and can freely live in his house and in some cases, he may give his house for rent and earn money. And in any case, the ownership of property is very important and I believe in this regard is not negative.
In conclusion, I want to emphasize that owning property is much better than renting. In this regard, many people do the right thing by owning property.
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- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very importany for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situaition 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in any case, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41176470588 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40144132038 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486274509804 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5402866362 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261944739119 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113014299565 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04434545374 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166101852006 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554105777172 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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