The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart compares the statistics of a survery about communication's coffee and tea buying and drinking usage in five Australian cities.
In general, what stands out from the bar is that there were considerable upward trends in the Melbourne while there were remarkable downward type in the Adelaide.
Looking at the statistics we can see that the highest consumers of coffee and tea is in the city of Melbourne last 4 weeks buy pure coffee was 43% and the high demand was a visit to a cafe to drink coffee and tea and it showed 64 per cent of people visit. For a statistician high result illustrates and the city Halberd and buy a instant coffee, they are ahead of Melbourne and showed a score of 54% while on cafe they almost equaled the city of Melbour, and the result showed 63 percent more of top city was Sydney in the city selling fresh coffee overtook top cities it Melba and Hobart. Sydney showed a result of 44 percent on the sale of fresh and it was a record among these cities.And at the same time the cities of Brisbane and Adelaide showed poor results but it should be noted that in the sale of instant coffee they occupied the second place and the third place in this table Brisbane showed 53 percent and Abelaid 50 percent.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n the city selling fresh coffee overtook top cities it Melba and Hobart. Sydney s...
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Suggestion: And
... and it was a record among these cities.And at the same time the cities of Brisbane...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, second, third, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46052631579 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38071452116 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521929824561 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4648465745 43.030603864 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 203.4 112.824112599 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.6 22.9334400587 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256808386474 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141845145188 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886336670189 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159271309492 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114703363018 0.0819641961636 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.2329268293 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.48 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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