The chart reveals the consequences of a research about human's coffee and tea purchasing and consuming habits in five cities of Australia.
It is clear that the percentage of city residents fluctuate every country each year. Firstly, Melbourne and Hobart's percentage of residents nearly 65% went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks. Moreover, percentage of Sydney's people are 62% less comparison than Melbourne and Hobart. Brisbane's 56% of human went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks. By contrast, Adelaide's people percentage are less than other four cities. In Hobart's most people bought instant coffee rather than other four cities habitants in last 4 weeks. In Brisbane and Adelaide rate of habitants near to 50% for buying instant coffee. In Sydney's people did not buy instant coffee less than other cities. Besides, all in the 5 cities buying fresh coffe rate less compares than other four cities. But in Sydney in this feature shows the percentage of residents near to 45%.
Overall, the feature of going to a cafe for coffee or tea indicates the most percentage of habitants in the 5 cities. Also, buying fresh and instant coffee features differentiate from each other.
- In the past when students did a University degree they tended to study in their own country Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad What are the advantages and disadvatages of this development You should use your own ideas knowledge and exper 61
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities
- Some people believe that parents have a great influence on children s growth but others think that influence from the outside plays a more important role Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured
- The diagram below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
The chart reveals the consequences of a research about humans coffee and tea purchasing ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 623, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... near to 50% for buying instant coffee. In Sydneys people did not buy instant coff...
^^
Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he 5 cities buying fresh coffe rate less compares than other four cities. But in ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90640394089 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57299463475 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477832512315 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1068153537 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.6153846154 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212525727851 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904786062922 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511812026469 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182396731034 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379378272263 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.