In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In these days, many people thing that, owning a home rather renting one is very essential to live for people. From my perspective, everything has two sides including benefical merits and determental demerits, followed up with a logical conclusion.
On the other hand, the majority of people like to live in own home preferably than in renting one. Why is that the case? homeownership is the dream of almost everyone who wishes for stability and comfort in life. Mostly, people prefer to invest in their own homes rather than spending entire lives in rented accommodations as it is a symbol of accomplishment as well as status. One of fundamental ways is to let people renting a home - it has help more in financial sides. Moreover, many finance options are available nowadays which have eased the process of buying a home.
On the other hand, it is a positive situation as a family gets their private space and can feel protected and cosy. Furthermore, one can make whatever changes they wish to make in their house without seeking for anyone approval and without permit they might throw a party in every moments. If a person buys a house for rent this person face various problems such as renewing the lease agreement.
To sum up, I prefer to live in owning a home rather than renting a house due to the fact that, there more beneficial sides rather to than determental demerits sides. In addition, It is a place where one builds memories and ignites numerous thoughts and feelings. It is a good Idea for people to possess a house compared to renting.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76014760148 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65080413144 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2207254665 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326016677468 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108829148995 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762184181107 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179868749642 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047435068928 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.