While it is true that technologies and innovations are providing us several choices. A section of people believes in it. However, some feel options are limited. I firmly agree that we have a number of options available in each aspect of our life, such as food, vehicles, gadgets, colleges and courses. The following paragraphs discuss a few points on this subject.
Firstly, in olden days people use to have traditional food where as today variety of food ranging from continental to Chinese menu is available to us. For instance, nowadays all restaurants are offering multi cuisine to their customers, which means people have various options available to choose.
Secondly, people use to travel with limited models of transportation. Today, governments provide a wide variety of facilities such as buses, trains and flights. Earlier days in India bullock-cart was the only option available. In addition, there are many choices are available in cars and bikes. Hence, people never limited by varieties while choosing their private vehicles.
Adding further, people were using bog standard items such as basic mobile phones without internet. Today, mobile phone companies provide consumers with a variety of features to select and making peoples' lives easier.
Finally, the education sector has been changed to a large extent. Engineering streams, sub categorized into specific fields. If we see chemical engineering splits into petroleum, plastic and oil engineering and giving options for students to choose according to their interest.
In a nutshell, I strongly agree that today people have several choices than they require and we should take advantage of this situation for a better life and enjoyment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42910447761 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73951503693 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4751486016 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206361465465 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576267278901 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513574411706 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100869477809 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552839397775 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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