You play sports (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital.
Write a letter to your teammate. In your letter
• say how you feel about the news
• ask about the treatment in the hospital
• suggest some ways of cheering him/her up
Dear Arena,
I was really surprised by hearing the news from Tina about your infection of covid virus owing to which the situation got worse and your had to be hospitalized.
This news is quite a setback since we just had a long video call couple of days back in which you looked absolutely amazing. Even, I am well-versed with the fact that you consider hospitals awful due to which this is going to be a task to settle there.
The major reason of writing you relates with your treatment and medication as you know that my mother also went unwell with the same epidemic but luckily, coped up with the assistance of our family doctor Mr. Smith. In this regard only, if you don’t mind, I would like to have go through from your prescriptions in order to ensure the reliability of the treatment.
Although this is a hard time to just lay on the bed for this whole time, you will pass it very soon and will join us like old times. I would say this is the best time to persue your hobby of being a leisure reader and re-think over some goals of life.
Praying for your speedy recovery.
Yours lovingly,
Mary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'relate'
Suggestion: relate
...there. The major reason of writing you relates with your treatment and medication as y...
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Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...if you don’t mind, I would like to have go through from your prescriptions in orde...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42233009709 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2923777521 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665048543689 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.829464061 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266391807105 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111358005403 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033232035182 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136221255058 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324134680968 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.