In many countries, prison is the most common solution for crimes. However, many think that better education is the most effective way to prevent people from committing further crime.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Many people opine that criminal approach deserves prison and other believes that education is the solution to the unlawful acts done by an individual. The essay firmly accords with the statement because lockup can control the crime rate and it can make them scared of severe punishment and deterrence.
To embark on the reason regarding my agreement, imprisonment can control the crime rate in a quick way. Long term imprisonment can isolate the criminal from thinking in the same way they think in violent manner. To exemplify, In the US, a survey was conducted in a northern province jails on criminals who were given life sentence. It was found that those areas where the prisoners are given long term imprisonments have less crime rate. Thus, it can be said that jail for long duration can lower the unlawful acts within the cities.
Moreover, prison can limit the influence of crime because of deterrence and threat of prison. The culprit will not think before committing crime if there is no threat of imprisonment. To exemplify, countries like Pakistan and Saudi Arabia have policy where a prisoner goes under intense work with limited food. So, because of this situation, the crime rate in several cities of both the cities are very less. Hence, it can be said that determent can sabotage the criminal’s missions.
To conclude, it can be said that jailing a criminal is crucial as it will lower the unlawful things in the surroundings and keeps the criminals away from getting dreadful punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a quick way" with adverb for "quick"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...imprisonment can control the crime rate in a quick way. Long term imprisonment can isolate the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98023715415 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62876458142 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8074612294 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.9230769231 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161226407137 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638136816579 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478141214016 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095863732391 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459155552375 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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