In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want on line without paying.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that paper based materials including books and newspaper will not be purchased by people as they have a chance to be informed virtually and free in the future. I completely agree with that statement because getting information on line will be really affordable and achievable just clicking one button as well as it will be a sign of fashion in the subsequent period.
Firstly, it is an indisputable fact that the technology has brought vitally significant changes to our lifestyle filling it with countless opportunities and opening the unlocked doors for us. It means that humans will have a strong tendency of utilizing these electronic gadgets including smartphones, computers, and TV with their particular purposes such as being aware of fresh and breaking news, reading best seller and original books because being informed by the help of them is absolutely complimentary and more achievable at any time and anywhere rather than printed ones. Taking network as an example, it's score will be higher in the future and it can lead to reduce the demand for newspaper and books.
Secondly, it is vitally important to note that publication style is becoming unfashionable day by day meaning that people will through away the editions as they are heavy and quite uncomfortable to carry with contrastingly, comparing on line resources with paper ones the former can be easily found in our little spaced pockets even at the birthday and wedding parties.
In my conclusion, I reaffirm my position again that the demand for publication will be reduced as a consequence of the humans' desire towards free on line contexts.
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...rticular purposes such as being aware of fresh and breaking news, reading best se...
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Suggestion: reading the best
...eing aware of fresh and breaking news, reading best seller and original books because being...
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...ble day by day meaning that people will through away the editions as they are heavy and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08518518519 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86133344456 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2151162754 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.142857143 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5714285714 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253979663011 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117589273489 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622180778233 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147337767992 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699816440873 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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