Some people think that public health is a responsibility of the government, while other believe that individuals should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both these views and give your opinion
At present day, a myriad of people are unhealthy, but they take treatment at that time. Few people argue that society's health is a responsibility of the authorities when others believe people should be responsible for their health. I will describe the reason for both topics in the next paragraph.
To begin with, the bureaucrats should take care of the public, because a plethora of people does not have more money. Although there are many types of disease, that treatment is costly, so people do not get good treatment. For example, during corona period, a hot of peoples are sick that time all treatment Cost was provided by the government because that is a big disease and many peoples joined government hospital. In the last, while country's health care facilities are good so that impact is well for economic.
On the other hand, people should responsible for their health, therefore the government does not provide money for small diseases, that is our responsibility when people are ill, that time people should go to the hospital for treatment. Moreover, if you take healthy dishes such as green vegetables, hence that is a good thing for people and people healthiness is well in their life.
I agree the public health should be the responsibility of the government because the bureaucrats should be given insurance to their country's people. While people have insurance, so they are given money by the insurance company.
To conclude, the government should take care of the public, but they also should be motivated to people, do not eat junk food, etc. so they may always stay healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00371747212 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66816106789 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505576208178 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3516783384 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378713408223 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14055905583 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135927965117 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233538646143 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09251863948 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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