signs of volcanic erruption
In this set of materials,the reading and lecture was both about Yellowstone Caldera, a supervolcano in Yellowstone National Park. The writer strongly postulates that seeing the current situation there is a possibilty that volcano will explodes soon, and endorse three theories for possible explanations. However, the lecturer claims these thoeries dubious and unconvincing, gainsays each of them.
The first and foremost, the writer begins by asserting that magnitude of the magma reservior under the Supervolcano is increased significantly that provides a good indication that volcanic erruption will occurs soon.On the other hand, the lecturer dismisses this point by insisting that increase in reservoir size does not mean that it would cause the erruption soon. Due to the fact that magma reservoir comprises of mostly rocky solid matter, only 2% is melted liquid. Therefore prediction about explosion can not be made. Moreover, he also explains that what lies under the magma is important not the appearent size.
Furthermore, the lecturer posits that researchers have found other volcanos in mojor other locations too that show the same activity. He named the rise and fall activity of volcanos are breathing of volcanos, and explains that after rising as a plateau the activity drops and this would happen in case of Yellowstone Caldera too.Hence, these movements are not significant for volcanic erruption. These claims clearly refutes the writer implications that rise in plateaue are signs of erruption happening sooner.
Ultimately, the writer wraps up its arguments by declaring that many earth quakes are seen in yellowstone area that indicates enhanced seisemic activity.In addition, these earthquakes could cause the activity of volcano to be triggered.Not surprisingly, the lecturer takes an issue with that by contending that seisemic activities are due to normal earth n
movements that prevents the pressure bulid uo under earth. Moreover there are volcanos nearby but was not effected
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 307.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54397394137 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87562567377 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 145.348785872 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596091205212 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.338556732 49.2860985944 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.833333333 110.228320801 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06452816374 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124000648475 0.272083759551 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366833016587 0.0996497079465 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716648984523 0.0662205650399 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523142957033 0.162205337803 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645924124042 0.0443174109184 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.3589403974 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.8541721854 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.2367328918 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.42419426049 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 63.6247240618 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.