People divided on the issue of hosting a worldwide sports event. Some individuals opine that it is advantageous, however, others believe it could be detrimental to the hosting country. This essay will discuss both views, personally, I prefer the former opinion.
On the one hand, there are a plethora of advantages in holding an international sporting event. To begin with, this type of occasion offers a great reputation and dignity to the hosting country as there is a strong likelihood that an enormous increase in the number of foreign tourists and obviously lead to economic profits and cultural widespread. Furthermore, if the hosting country manages the sporting event appropriately and attractively, there will be a long-term sponsorship or a lucrative investment from some international corporations on operating major events.
On the other hand, people claim that this world-class occasion can offer some negative impacts on the hosting country. Firstly, it is necessary for the government to erect and upgrade the domestic sports facilities and a great sum of money must be allocated. Secondly, an international event means spectators from every corner of the world would swarm to the hosting country. This massive movement might undermine the country's security since criminals and terrorists can invade the country comfortably for illegal purposes.
Personally, I suppose that the advantages of hosting worldwide sports events outweigh the disadvantages. Although there are some serious problems that may weaken the country's security, effective and appreciate solutions must be contrived.
In conclusion, each view has its own evidence that makes they are both reasonable. However, in my opinion, I estimate the viewpoint that the positive points as regards the promotion for the country’s image and financial gains are long-lasting and sustainable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as regards, i suppose, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60563380282 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06979254423 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.212282549 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290127000689 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101375259517 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575700991297 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154298571921 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404657978184 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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