Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. While some people believe that international sporting events create problems, others believe they can bring significant benefits.
The international sporting event is one of the most popular event which always attract many spectators all around the world so that many countries always want to become host country. In my view, this is a great opportunity for the host country to gain important advantages. However, many issues in the organization and management stage will directly affect quality of event.
First of all, international sporting events contribute to growth of tourism industry. Accordingly, a large amount of tourists increase dramatically during the event period. Additionally, they tend to choose a journey which combined taking parting the event with travelling in the host country in several day. Besides, the host country will earn a giant profit in finance. Because of highly increasing demand in the event period, the development of tourism will lead to development of other services about food and beverage, accommodation, entertainment. Tourists willing to spent a lot for their vacation.
On the other hand, these events will be in risk of complaint about organisation. The government invest a large amount of budget in preparing for the event such as upgrading the stadium, improving infrastructure, setting up some outdoor decorations so people desire the event can be more successful than their expectation. Therefore, the success of event is based on the effectiveness of organization and management phase. Moreover, security concern is a serious problem in the event period. It’s a chance for many crimes like theft, terrorism, gambling which happened easily. The security management become more difficult because the number of participants is oversized.
On the whole, the organisation of the international sporting event positively create many opportunities in economy of host country. Besides, the host country should consider some threatens which can affect the event in order to have a careful preparation for a successful event.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun day seems to be countable; consider using: 'several days'.
Suggestion: several days
... with travelling in the host country in several day. Besides, the host country will earn a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, such as, first of all, in my view, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55351681957 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07673225424 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525993883792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2598756333 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5789473684 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377704209779 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127467426262 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107131719776 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252658779508 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988179431824 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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