The bar chart illustrates the percentage of males and females engaged in physical activities during the year 2010.
Overall, men of age group 15 to 65 and over engaged in physical activities are showing some fluctuation. Meanwhile, female elucidate constant increase between the age group from 15 to 64 and it slightly falls down.
Males of age group 15 to 24 has 52.8% engaged in physical activities but women has only 47.7% which is comparatively lesser. Although females has 48.9% growth between the age group of 25 to 34, only 42.2% of men are engaged in physical activities. 52.3% of Females age group 35 to 44 are more involved in physical exercise than that of males it is lesser by 39.5%. When it comes to age group of 45 to 54 males shows less interest than females being physically fit i.e. 43% and 53.3%. Similarly, women of age group 55 to 64 has 53% involved in physical activities but men has comparatively lower of 45.1%. When it comes to age group of 65 and over both men and women are showing constant stand by with minimal difference of 46.7% and 47.1%.
Therefore, the percentage of women involved in physical exercise are higher within the age group of 25 to 65.While the men remain fluctuating.
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years 61
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lowed', 'lowered'.
Suggestion: lowed; lowered
...al activities but men has comparatively lower of 45.1%. When it comes to age group of...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...higher within the age group of 25 to 65.While the men remain fluctuating.
^^^^^
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...higher within the age group of 25 to 65.While the men remain fluctuating.
^^^^^
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to 65.While the men remain fluctuating.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69626168224 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64702612646 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467289719626 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 10.640018797 43.030603864 25% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.5 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39318861515 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185670977131 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643005758471 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252374719643 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390886257391 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lowed', 'lowered'.
Suggestion: lowed; lowered
...al activities but men has comparatively lower of 45.1%. When it comes to age group of...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...higher within the age group of 25 to 65.While the men remain fluctuating.
^^^^^
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...higher within the age group of 25 to 65.While the men remain fluctuating.
^^^^^
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to 65.While the men remain fluctuating.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69626168224 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64702612646 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467289719626 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 10.640018797 43.030603864 25% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.5 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39318861515 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185670977131 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643005758471 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252374719643 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390886257391 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.