Q: Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past, capital punishment was widely applied to the criminal who were committed to the serious crime, but now this method is rarely employed by few governments. While I accept it has some conveniences on the society and the administration for controlling the violence, I believe that capital punishment should be banned for several reasons.
On the one hand, there are some benefits to the regimes when they implicate the capital punishment. Firstly, petty criminal would discourage to become dangerous offender because they can see penalty of the other sinner. This could result the reduction of crime on the society. Secondly, many governments have to spend a vast amount of money by fostering the convict. As an example, the USA government spends more than 5 percent money of their budget by rearing the criminal in the prison. However, if they employ the capital punishment, the state can able to save much money. Thus, it is fairly easy to comprehend that capital punishment has some advantages on the society and the nation.
On the other hand, it can be argued why this method should be banned. One important point is that people can be wrongly convicted. For instance, recent news is published by a daily newspaper named Daily Star in Nigeria that a person was wrongly punished after 25 years it has been proved that he is innocent. If the capital punishment would apply to this person, he would not get the proper judgment. Another point is that as some criminal are mentally illness, they have no idea about his crime; moreover, this disease has treatment. Therefore, it would not be a good idea to apply this action in all circumstances. Furthermore, the life time prison, rehabilitation etc. can be the alternative solution to manage the crime.
In conclusions, I think capital punishment should not be required in this modern era. There are many alternative methods we can apply instead of capital punishment for controlling the serious crime on the society.
- The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 63
- Q Prevention is better than cure Out of the country s health budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measure To what extent do you agree or disagree 86
- Q: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospital, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computer a good things or should we be more suspici 70
- Q: Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 80
are mentally illness
are mentally ill
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 331 350
No. of Characters: 1606 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.265 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.852 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.648 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 118 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.389 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.899 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.488 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5