In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantage and disadvantages?
In the ancient period, whenver students took a university degnity, they tried to continue their study in their own country. Turning to the modern world, educational system are evolving substantially that, the majority of students have a great chance to study abroad which is effective way to take sufficient experiments. In this essay, I will analyse some benificial sides and disadvantages of the development.
On the one hand, to address this issue, in the past government did not have a inspiration to mobilise their attention for developing students' level. In my opinion, ancient time observed that, a wide array of possibility to private humans with inclusive life. For instance, the proportion of students had to work to supply their requirements after the study all the time compared to the comprehensive globe. Last point is that, students did not visualise about international universities only these ambition became reachless in the past.
On the other hand, in the 21-century come people much more accessable to show their quality of knowledge in the temporary world. In addition, government try to modify good role modelling for students' study. I convince that, there are so many advantages of the alteration rather than disadvantages. For example, students can take source of qualification about abroad country' economy, other practical impact of studing abroad contributes unprecendented improvements such as learning their languages, cultures, traditions also,may influence to increase students go to study abroad which is valueable way to unify a range of cultures. However, in the brief lifetime, fewer students are replacing identical position in spite of will mobilise the base of skill to improve the development of the own country despite they have sufficient condition and enough force.
In conclusion, in the past students tended to study in theor own country that, they did not enough comfort zone besides they have much more creativities to study with foreigners and get a lot of profit by learning international system whenever less students will be secure to go to their ambitions which is a negative site of these modification.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ue, in the past government did not have a inspiration to mobilise their attention...
^
Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this ambition' or 'these ambitions'?
Suggestion: this ambition; these ambitions
...e about international universities only these ambition became reachless in the past. On th...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , may
...eir languages, cultures, traditions also,may influence to increase students go to st...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y that, they did not enough comfort zone besides they have much more creativities...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun students is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... learning international system whenever less students will be secure to go to their ...
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Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this modification' or 'these modifications'?
Suggestion: this modification; these modifications
...r ambitions which is a negative site of these modification.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36470588235 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01910869315 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561764705882 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4225074451 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.307692308 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397514557995 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120350690222 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970043132094 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252520996343 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646819538495 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ue, in the past government did not have a inspiration to mobilise their attention...
^
Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this ambition' or 'these ambitions'?
Suggestion: this ambition; these ambitions
...e about international universities only these ambition became reachless in the past. On th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , may
...eir languages, cultures, traditions also,may influence to increase students go to st...
^^^^
Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y that, they did not enough comfort zone besides they have much more creativities...
^^
Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun students is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... learning international system whenever less students will be secure to go to their ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this modification' or 'these modifications'?
Suggestion: this modification; these modifications
...r ambitions which is a negative site of these modification.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36470588235 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01910869315 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561764705882 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4225074451 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.307692308 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397514557995 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120350690222 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970043132094 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252520996343 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646819538495 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.