Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession Why is this the case and what can be done to avoid it

In this modern era ,farmer play a crucial role in every field and they provide food for all people and farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngster hesitate to enter in this trend in this essay discuss why does this happen and what measure can be done to avoid it.
To commence with, the first and foremost reason is that individual are busy in their life and they show their interest on that place or work where they feel comfortable and where they need more money so they do not give attention in this field and they have to enter in this trend.the another reason is that in this profession they have a pure experience about farming like what ingredients are include and all information about seeds how to grow and many other things so they do not gain stress of this trend and show their interest on other side where they entertain or where they do not work hard

On the other hand,the first solution is that with the help of advanced technology government can advertise the benefits of the farming and they can use other method to know about main benefits to enter and join this profession moreover, with the help of this trend there are many job opportunitiesor strong and the ecosystem also control

To conclude,farmer play main role in every nation without farming the country gallows and they spend their money on the other countries for fulfill their financial and four things so every individual are also join this profession to make the backbone strong and they show their interest inthis profession

Votes
Average: 5.8 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71111111111 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36589855964 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 135.0 20.2975951904 665% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 480.0 49.4020404114 972% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 636.0 106.682146367 596% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 135.0 20.7667163134 650% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.5 7.06120827912 375% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368424768072 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.398743038563 0.084324248473 473% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185576374428 0.0667982634062 278% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271703743215 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183351100262 0.056905535591 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 68.3 13.0946893788 522% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -57.09 50.2224549098 -114% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 54.8 11.3001002004 485% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.67 8.58950901804 148% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 56.0 10.1190380762 553% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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